HOME - make the faces live button links toy your blogs / add links to your slideshare/vimeo/youtube etc pages - it helps access your work quickly Q1 - excellent - clear effective and well written Q2 - excellent - speedy talking but it is clear / very good use of still images to help me make sense of your comments Q3 - good but you need a brief papragraph on the page explaining what you decided on an why - make a decision and explain it Q4 - well done - detailed and thorough - my only quibble would be your statements that whites will like it as the cast are white - that is incorrect and shows too little awareness of audience - the comments about representation at the time s good nut you need a more contemporary angle - reflect on audience and actor diversity now and the fact the audiences of all heritages enjoy watching other races HOWEVER the all white cast could limit my audience as some audiences may not enjoys it as much.... reference the need for audiences to identify with an actor - that identification can be race/action/personality etc - you need a more reflective and aware conclusion - also increase text size a little - i am too old for this size Q5 - it is 'less likely to have a large fan base in america' NOT 'it isn't likely to get known' - the USA love British films/actors BUT they are not as successful in money terms etc - show a little more in depth thinking. Also text size is too small again. Also add a little about narrative - in media language - excitment/thrill/empathy/familiarity/emulation/sex appeal/hero-worship etc thing selling points Q6 - check question wording!!! clear and effective presentation - the need a summative conclusion - written: reflect on how you used them/improved/refined and developed overall - which were most useful/difficult and why / how did they improve your performance/production - what have you learned Q7 - good work
overall excellent work (Iam impressed) and easy to refine and improve still further if you read my notes above
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Q2 - excellent - speedy talking but it is clear / very good use of still images to help me make sense of your comments
Q3 - good but you need a brief papragraph on the page explaining what you decided on an why - make a decision and explain it
Q4 - well done - detailed and thorough - my only quibble would be your statements that whites will like it as the cast are white - that is incorrect and shows too little awareness of audience - the comments about representation at the time s good nut you need a more contemporary angle - reflect on audience and actor diversity now and the fact the audiences of all heritages enjoy watching other races HOWEVER the all white cast could limit my audience as some audiences may not enjoys it as much.... reference the need for audiences to identify with an actor - that identification can be race/action/personality etc - you need a more reflective and aware conclusion - also increase text size a little - i am too old for this size
Q5 - it is 'less likely to have a large fan base in america' NOT 'it isn't likely to get known' - the USA love British films/actors BUT they are not as successful in money terms etc - show a little more in depth thinking. Also text size is too small again. Also add a little about narrative - in media language - excitment/thrill/empathy/familiarity/emulation/sex appeal/hero-worship etc thing selling points
Q6 - check question wording!!! clear and effective presentation - the need a summative conclusion - written: reflect on how you used them/improved/refined and developed overall - which were most useful/difficult and why / how did they improve your performance/production - what have you learned
Q7 - good work
overall excellent work (Iam impressed) and easy to refine and improve still further if you read my notes above
Well done for meeting the deadline.
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